tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post1599078396285661757..comments2012-04-03T06:16:23.251-07:00Comments on Confessions of a Commoner: The Commoner's Short Story: A Goodbye with a SmileIrfan Shaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-28950255143695532962009-04-06T00:43:00.000-07:002009-04-06T00:43:00.000-07:00omg. really?????? CONGRATULATIONS! That is amazing...omg. really?????? CONGRATULATIONS! That is amazing! I'm really honestly happy for you, I know how hard you work and it's slowly paying off. I am proud of you Irfan. I really am. :)Eemelduhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602002486067177761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-32185891321951144392009-03-30T21:30:00.000-07:002009-03-30T21:30:00.000-07:00"She wanted to go see her friend. So she went one ..."She wanted to go see her friend. So she went one morning, but never came back" I wonder what had happened to her. perhaps that's where you might want to write about. What's her purpose in appearing some 9 years later? Sounds like a good start to second episode!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-89704965749645062102009-03-29T20:08:00.000-07:002009-03-29T20:08:00.000-07:00anonymous: haha. thanx... sorry 2 disappoint. i kn...anonymous: haha. thanx... sorry 2 disappoint. i know it is, i couldn't seem to think of how to end it in a better way. so i wrote what i wrote 7 yrs ago. maybe i'll write better stories next time. thanx again...<BR/><BR/>imelda: yea right. it won't be anytime soon la. owh, i got in for masters in Universiti Malaya.Irfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-88356431540533649042009-03-29T18:41:00.000-07:002009-03-29T18:41:00.000-07:00Good story line. Though the ending is somewhat pre...Good story line. Though the ending is somewhat predictable, its still very pleasant. Well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-9527027221411539662009-03-29T15:13:00.000-07:002009-03-29T15:13:00.000-07:00ahh... okay okay.. well congrats on the widespread...ahh... okay okay.. well congrats on the widespread publicity! :D Do not forget me when you're rich and famous someday..Eemelduhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602002486067177761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-92093087910566712009-03-29T03:21:00.000-07:002009-03-29T03:21:00.000-07:00awesome story irfan! i am very much moved with the...awesome story irfan! i am very much moved with the story. and i strongly urge you to start writting short stories and get it published! hats off buddy! and write more of this kinda short stories! simply amazing!Sanjay George Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06649368584824160389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-25567317788474571682009-03-29T00:41:00.000-07:002009-03-29T00:41:00.000-07:00nope... pure fiction. i was wearing my thinking ca...nope... pure fiction. i was wearing my thinking cap during the englsih paper and this was what i came up with... haha.Irfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-18744573452925121542009-03-29T00:29:00.000-07:002009-03-29T00:29:00.000-07:00fun, was this story somehow based on a true event ...fun, was this story somehow based on a true event or character?Eemelduhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602002486067177761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-52567393308512942752009-03-29T00:26:00.000-07:002009-03-29T00:26:00.000-07:00thanx anonymous and khaliq for the comments. i'm f...thanx anonymous and khaliq for the comments. i'm from a humble country called malaysia. haha. it's a fictional story actually, so i thought i'd just put in "summer" so that some people can relate to the story. i was just writing this out of pure boredom. but i'll try to write more if i have free time. novel? not so sure. i've got my hands full with engineering stuffs! =PIrfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-67087296513278922892009-03-28T22:56:00.000-07:002009-03-28T22:56:00.000-07:00Is there a book in there. Perhaps when you have mo...Is there a book in there. Perhaps when you have more time, you might want to consider writing short stories and hopefully a novel somedaykhaliqhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11180840026541766427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-3254631194362320912009-03-28T22:47:00.000-07:002009-03-28T22:47:00.000-07:00Eh Bro, which part of the country do you stay? You...Eh Bro, which part of the country do you stay? You"ve got summer sure also got winter mah! But still, very good story mah! feel like crying mah!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-6500556830914215962009-03-26T17:19:00.000-07:002009-03-26T17:19:00.000-07:00feeling gila cita ni. great for short movie.feeling gila cita ni. great for short movie.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-65413403612263793252009-03-25T04:31:00.000-07:002009-03-25T04:31:00.000-07:00thanks rinkimeki. unfortunately, i did not write t...thanks rinkimeki. unfortunately, i did not write the story as it is for spm. it's a remake, if u might call it...<BR/><BR/>i am more well read now compared to years ago, so of course the grammar and the vocab have improved a lil'...Irfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-44780353499313165382009-03-25T02:40:00.000-07:002009-03-25T02:40:00.000-07:00If this you wrote just your for your SPM paper...I...If this you wrote just your for your SPM paper...<BR/><BR/>I have to say you are freaking awesome writer dude.The story moves me...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-31119220652925549892009-03-24T01:16:00.000-07:002009-03-24T01:16:00.000-07:00this is more of an emotional story, not quite horr...this is more of an emotional story, not quite horror. Ok la, try for 'chicken soup for the malaysian soul', i'll give you that much! =pEemelduhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602002486067177761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-31143259392141999382009-03-23T11:17:00.000-07:002009-03-23T11:17:00.000-07:00thank u, imelda... =)boleh masuk "Singapore Ghost ...thank u, imelda... =)<BR/><BR/>boleh masuk "Singapore Ghost Stories" tak? haha...Irfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-19926568718577803272009-03-23T10:07:00.000-07:002009-03-23T10:07:00.000-07:00SOOOOOO feeling! I'm here sitting at college, free...SOOOOOO feeling! I'm here sitting at college, freezing cold and tired, in-between classes... then I started reading this and I swear it brought me to another place. Kudos!Eemelduhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03602002486067177761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-11680422465960332372009-03-23T09:50:00.000-07:002009-03-23T09:50:00.000-07:00thanx auntie jo! =)this would be one of the sympto...thanx auntie jo! =)<BR/><BR/>this would be one of the symptoms of the "boredom syndrom"...Irfan Shaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01996261820023648052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8415224417574495239.post-46862460876030932122009-03-23T09:26:00.000-07:002009-03-23T09:26:00.000-07:00Excellent!!Excellent!!Johana Joharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13859532173560268928noreply@blogger.com